Guam Scuba Diving

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can you help me with the grammers please?

I would like to speech about my journey.

Guam was the most impressisve place I ever had been, when i was in middle school.

I only had a trip abroad, which was Guam.

It was long time ago, but I can still remember the trip was very exciting.

I was very fluttering, and happy, because it was my first time to air trip.

I learned lots of experinces, and found different things.

I remember one of my experience in Guam was scuba diving.

wearing swimming goggles, bring fish foods in the water(sea), watching fishes under the water. I really enjoyed it.


I also ride on banana boats, went to aboroginal town, watched their tradition dance, people pluck the coconuts on the tree and learned myth of the Guam..

I was in Guam only for five days, but I had valuable experience. I learned different cultures and took lots of pictures for rememberance.

Ive seen some cerebrities on my way back to korea.

can any1 help me with my grammer please

I would like to speak about my journey.

When I was in middle school, I went to Guam. Guam was the most impressive place I had ever been.

At the time, Guam was the only trip abroad I had taken.

It was long time ago, but I can still remember the trip was very exciting.

I was very nervous and happy, because it was my first time to be on an airplane.

I learned lots of different things and had many experiences.

I remember one of my experiences in Guam was scuba diving.

When I went scuba diving, I remember wearing swimming goggles and feeding the fish while I was watching them under water. I really enjoyed it.

I also sailed on a banana boat, went to an aboriginal town, watched a traditional dance, watched people pluck the coconuts off of trees and learned myth of the Guam.

I was in Guam only for five days, but I had a valuable experience. I learned about different cultures and took lots of pictures to remember my experience.

I saw some celebrities on my way back to Korea.

*******I would explain a little more what "the myth of Guam" is or just take that part of the sentence out. Good luck!

Guam Scuba diving


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